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deadspread83

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Good use black and white! Its not always easy to show a painting or a drawing inside a drawing and make it look different enough, but you've done it well here. Nice composition too. Keep up the good work!

TheLostCount responds:

Thank you!!

I like the mixture of photography and drawing. Good job!

Ushinattarory responds:

Tysm!!

Good work! One note: in the original, the lines are marionette strings, because he is a "puppet" being controlled. Keep up the good work!

CalamityGanon responds:

Thanks! I know that the strings were meant to show that as he was being lowered down by his wife like in The Trial, however I wanted to make the lines separated to look like how thin strings look in real life, where if they hit the light they're almost transparent.

Really unique and well done. Great work!

FTerracciano responds:

Thank you!

I like all the little details in this. The mermaid in the fishtank. The lizard, the cats, the dinosaur... Lots of neat little story telling pieces here. Great work!

Looking at your previous work with perspective like "Outside" vs this one, you've grown leaps and bounds. Terrific detail work here. Great job!

Lots of great stuff here. Good color scheme and lighting. Keep up the good work!

Great job on shadow and form. Really looks dimensional. Your work gets better all the time!

bullsam12 responds:

Thank you

You should consider uploading your movie here on Newgrounds. Nice work either way!

VaguelyCreepy responds:

Thank you, that means a lot! I definitely would love to get it somewhere other than a barely-used YouTube channel, I just don't know if I can. I don't have access to the program I used any more, the file is massive and I'm not sure what the best way to compress it would be, or even how I would, a bunch of little problems like that adding up to a big ol' roadblock.

There is so much conveyed here with very few panels. It's concise, it's story driven and there is emotion. Really great work!

Ju1ceB0xBubbleBath responds:

thank you! your words mean a lot

I draw stuff. I do other stuff too.

Robert Hay @deadspread83

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